My teenage self leaned against the counter in our kitchen,
listening to my dad. I don't know remember what we were talking about, but the
things he said were so eye-opening and revelatory to me that I can remember
every detail of that moment--the dark wood of our 80s style cabinets, the
dishwasher running, my mom sitting on a bar stool, correcting papers. Both of
them in one room probably meant they were telling me I couldn't do something
(and very rightfully so!) or maybe they were telling me I ought to be doing
something. But I don't recall feeling upset. Instead, I just remember having
this exciting a-ha! moment.
"When you are a baby," my dad said, "your world is very small. You don't do anything on your own, and if you are by yourself, all you can see is your crib or the ceiling. Then you learn how to sit on your own, and your world triples in size. When you learn to crawl, your world expands to encompass the whole room. As your ability to take care of yourself increases, your world continues to grow--eventually you've allowed into more spaces in the house, and then into the yard. One day you're world grows to include the street, or even the block. Bikes increase your world, and so does your driver's license; until one day you realize that your world includes most of the planet earth--and beyond, if you work hard and are really lucky."
You probably didn't just experience that same flash of inspiration that I had as a teenager. You might even think I'm pretty silly for not figuring all that out on my own. However, that concept gave me a bit more patience as I waited for my own world to expand. I even remember wondering if I'd tried to expand my world a little too soon when I was lying in the emergency room after I'd gotten in a car accident in an unfamiliar town.
But this concept can translate to writing advice too! In fact, some of my favorite authors use this concept in their books:
The Harry Potter series:
In Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone, the very first
scene in the book sets up the magical world we've all come to know and love. A
cat sits on the corner reading--no, looking at--a street sign. People in capes
wander the streets and owls are flying everywhere. Slowly the world
expands--Hagrid comes and tells Harry about a school. They go to Diagon Alley.
Harry figures out how to board the Hogwart's Express and spends the rest of the
year at school.
In book 2, we learn about house elves and meet the families
of some of Harry's classmates, especially the Weasleys. We see the Burrow for
the first time, and learn how life is different in a magical family. We get our
first glimpse of the dark world of Knockturn Alley. In book 3, we learn about
Azkaban and especially about Harry's parents and their friends. The world
expands to include werewolves and dementors. By book 4, we know so much about
the magical world that it doesn't seem like there is much left to know, but
Rowling is just getting started. Harry gets to go to the Quidditch World Cup,
where we learn that there is an entire world left to explore. We get to know
schools in other parts of the world, and we learn a lot more about the Ministry
of Magic, both good and bad.
In book 5, we actually get to see the Ministry of Magic and
also spend time at St. Mungo's Hospital for Magical Maladies and Injuries. In
book 6, we delve more deeply into the rich history of Harry's world, and in
book 7, we don't even make it to Hogwarts until nearly the end of the book.
When I want to reread a Harry Potter book, I'm not very
tempted by book 1. It's not as rich a world as the others. But can you imagine
if she'd tried to stuff all of the characters, their histories and the whole
magical world into book 1? It would have been too much.
The Queen's Thief Series
I just finished reading The King of Attolia. Then I went
back and reread my favorite parts. Then I gave up and started the whole book
over again. It was that good. While I was reading the first book, The Thief,
though, I couldn't imagine the author being able to get an interesting sequel
out of the story. Although it was interesting, it seemed too simple. Without spoiling it
though, I'll just say that she pulls off a twist at the end that proved that
the whole story was more complicated then I'd originally thought.
Book 2, The Queen of Attolia is so much more intricate that it seems like a different story altogether, and so dark in the beginning that I had
to keep reminding myself that loads of people loved this and I was going to
find out why.
By the middle, I knew why. It's Eugenides. And the other characters. Their relationships with each other are dazzling. Megan Whalen Turner's series pulls in
tightly on one aspect of her world. Then it expands out to show a dizzyingly
complex world, and then pulls in tight to explore another part of the world,
and then another.
I haven't read book 4 yet, but from what I understand, a
great deal of it centers around a character we haven't seen since book 1. I'm
excited for that, as long as I still get my Eugenides time.
Expanding Your World
You can create a snapshot of your whole world by showing how
magic/religion/history affects your character in one place at one time. As
their world expands, so does your opportunity for storytelling.
This is not a hard and fast rule. I can't even tell you that
it works every time. What I do know is that we are quickly becoming a society
ruled by sequels. We like to get to know our characters and the worlds they
live in very well. The Tortall Universe, by Tamora Pierce is a great example of
this. She's written 5 sets of books set in the same world, with different
heroines, but overlapping characters. People love it!
In the Tortall universe, there doesn't seem to be a great
deal of planning from one series to another. I don't think Tamora Pierce had
ever dreamed of Daine when she wrote about Allanna, or that she had Beka Cooper
in mind when she first created George (ah George. He's right up there with
Euginides on my list of favorite characters ever). However, I think she knows
where she's going from book one of a series to the end of that series.
And we need to know where we are going too. Readers can
magically tell if we don't really know our world, even if we're only showing
one small piece of it at the moment.
Happy writing!
Okay, this whole post is great. It's so hard not to want to spill the beans up front about this cool world you've created, but you're right that the slow unfolding of it is much more satisfying for the reader.
ReplyDeleteMy absolute favorite part of this post, though, is where you confess your love for Eugenides. Ha! He can steal anything - especially reader's hearts. (in all seriousness, I'm glad you stuck with the series and are enjoying it - only 3 more years till book 5! Now go check out sounis.livejournal.com)
I love him, love him, love him, Susan. It is the new goal of my life to create a character as complex and aggravating and lovable as he is. I don't know if I'm capable of bringing my characters that low though, and I think it was necessary. Thanks for making me give the series another try!
DeleteI loved the way each Harry Potter book took us deeper and deeper into the wizard world. I think if Rowling had presented her entire wizard world up front, we would have been overloaded with weird and the book wouldn't have been as accessible. Easing a reader into the world works so much better.
ReplyDeleteGreat post!
* wakes up groggy, pours himself a mug of coke and lights a cigarette. The scruffy protagonist proceeds to check teh intarwebz*
DeleteMe: Whas' dis' Qween Fief seriez? (this is the my slurry, had-not-enough-sleep voice)
Me: Aw, damn it, now I want to Google it.
* reads the Amazon excerpt*
Me: Holy, hopscotch jumping Jesus on a tricycle, this book looks awesome, maybe I should get it and read it.
*Profound silence of contemplation*
Me: Nah, man, I got a thesis to write.
*Puff of smoke. Devil sits on my shoulder*
Devil: Come on, brah. You LOVE books. Just a quick skim. You know you want it.
Me: Where the hell is that other guy with the wings?
Devil: Never mind him, man, come on just a few pages of sweet, sweet literary goodness.
Me: Last time I listened to you I stayed up late and when I came to, I was lying on my bed covered in Dorito crumbs, books scattered around my place and I found a tattoo of questionable morale on my chest.
Devil: You DID like it.
Me: ...
Me: You are an effin' enabler, man.
Devil: Come on do you REALLY want to write your thesis now?
Me: ... *grumbles and brings forth his Kindle*
Prosers has always great book recommendations, especially for YA.
Thanks for nourishing my novel addiction, peeps!
Oh, and if you love world immersion try CROAK by Gina Damico, Melanie!
Keep those delicious recommendations coming Prosers! :)
Thanks MaryAnn!
DeleteStefan, This is the guy with the halo talking. I just finished book 4, and I did so by leaving a family party and barricading myself in my in-laws family room while they played kick ball outside. Guess what? After I finished, the book was still there. And it will be when your thesis is finished too. (When I was writing my thesis, Ender's Game was the book I stayed up til dawn reading. I should say re-reading.)
DeleteGood points Melanie. I too now need to read that series.
ReplyDeleteGreat Post!