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I’ve been thinking about blogging about this for a while now ever
since I wrote this
blog post on characterization. I thought that maybe some people would find
it interesting if I shared what I learned about characters from my very very
limited acting experience. But now that
I’ve learned that Sheena was a drama major in college and Trisha spent a year
working as an actress, I feel a little intimidated about writing this post,
but…I’m going to do it anyway. Cause I
got nothing else.
So Sheena and Trisha please chime in
and share your expertise. I’d love to
hear your thoughts on this.
Okay, now after that lengthy and
insecure introduction, I’ll get started.
Acting isn’t just memorizing
lines. Actors create the characters as
much as writers do. It really is amazing
to see the same play done with different actors. They say the same words and tell the same
story, but each actor brings something different to the role. They create something truly unique.
The role of Indiana Jones was originally offered to Tom Selleck, who had to turn it down because of Magnum PI. It is hard for me to imagine Tom Selleck or anyone else really as Indiana Jones. Harrison Ford truly took that role and made it his, and I’m not sure if the movie would have become so iconic if it hadn’t been for his performance.
My point is that actors know as much
if not more about creating realistic, memorable characters than we writers do,
and I really think that there is a lot we writers can learn from them.
1. Motivation
is the key to creating a believable character. The phrase I heard over and over in every
drama class and every play was, “what is your motive.” Every actor needs to know what their
character wants, and not just in the overall play, but in every scene, every
word, every movement. Stage direction is
given to provide movement, but the actor must give that movement meaning.
I’ve blogged many
times before that knowing your characters’ motives is essential for good
characterization, but I’m going to say it one more time at least (probably
more). You need to understand what your
characters really want, what they think they want, and what they are in denial
about wanting in every scene, every movement, every word.
2. The small movements are important, but can be overdone. In my drama classes,
a lot of the students (including me) struggled with what to do with our hands. The director gave us those big movements like
sitting down or crossing to stage right, but we had to figure out those small
movements. It was tough. Too few movements and the character seems too
stiff, but too many wild gestures and the character looks comical, both of
these extremes can make the character feel unnatural (unless of course the
character is supposed to be stiff or comical, then it works J). Ultimately, every actor needs to find the
right balance. But those small movements
were more than just making the character look natural. They can convey thoughts and meaning that
aren’t in dialogue. They are a way of
subtly showing character.
Balancing small
movements is important in writing too.
Too little movement and you get talking head syndrome, too much movement
and the characters seem twitchy, but just the right movement at just the right
moment can show aspects of a character’s personality that can’t be shown in
dialogue or even internal monologues, especially when the character thinks they
want one thing but really want something else.
3. Be in the moment. There are a lot of things to worry about when
you are performing on the stage. There
is remembering the lines, the cues, the stage direction, and sometimes, gaging
the audience’s responses. A good actor
needs to be in the moment. He can’t
worry about what is coming next or what the audience is thinking, he has to be that
character at that moment and think of nothing else. The audience can tell when the actor is not completely
immersed in his character.
I’ve found that
my best writing comes from being in the moment.
I find that I have to go over every scene at least twice. The first time just trying to get down on the
page what happens, but the second pass, I try to immerse myself in the character
and imagine what exactly she/he is seeing and thinking. I can’t always tap into that, but when I do,
I can feel it and I think the readers can too.
4. Always give yourself somewhere to go. I mean emotionally,
not physically. I’m not sure if this has
a technical name, but it was acting advice that always stuck with me. No matter how angry or sad the character is,
you always leave room for the character to get angrier or sadder. If
you give all your anger to the scene, your character can’t get more angry,
and you will have no place else to go. I don’t know why, but the audience can feel
this. The scene loses tension because the
audience knows that you’ve reached your limit. So you need to hold back some of the anger or
the sorrow or whatever the emotion your character is feeling, so the audience
always feels that tension that things can get worse.
I think this is
true in writing as well. I’ve heard the
advice of torturing your characters. Trap them up in a tree and throw rocks at
them. I think we do need to let our
characters suffer, but we also need to hold back a little to. Take them to the brink of being broken, but
don’t break them. Let the readers feel
that as bad as things are for the character, it can still get worse. Keep that tension going because once they’ve
hit rock bottom, there is no place for the story to go but up.
So those are the lessons I learned
about writing from my brief experience with acting. I didn't have a very long acting stint, but I'm thankful that I was able to take something away from it besides just having lots of fun. :)
~MaryAnn
~MaryAnn
I was never an actress, but I do agree that the actor can make or break a part. I hate all the girls in the transformer movies. They are beautiful but boring to watch, unless your a man and want eye candy of oourse.
ReplyDeleteI agree Harrison Ford was Indian Jones. He has charisma that even in tinseltown is rare.
Yeah, I'm wasn't fond of those girls in The Transformer movies either, but there is something very likable about Shia LaBeouf (who played Sam). Those movies would have bombed without him, IMO.
DeleteYeah Harrison Ford is very charismatic. So is Will Smith, and both of them are phenomenal actors on top of it. That is very rare.
I can't really add anything. This is such a great post. I always learn something from you, MaryAnn, and feel incredibly lucky to know you. Just like every actor has a different way of portraying a character, every writer has a different point of view when writing. I love getting an inside look at how you and the other Prosers do things, because it gives me new techniques to try out. Thank you for sharing, and for inspiring us.
ReplyDeleteAnd all I can say is, thank goodness for Magnum PI! I can't imagine anyone but Harrison Ford playing Indiana Jones.
Thanks Trisha. I feel the same way about all of you guys. That is my favorite part of being apart of this blog is getting insights into how all you talented prosers do things. :)
DeleteMe too! I never would have thought about how the skills of an actor could enhance my writing, but I'm excited to use some of these ideas in my own writing. Thanks!
DeleteNever heard of Magnum PI but Tom Selleck looks similar to Harrison Ford enough that I probably wouldn't care about it from a physical perspective (as I'm sure some of the ladies do). But Ford definitely brought the character to life with that grumbling mumbling voice of his.
ReplyDeleteExcellent post, MaryAnn. It made me want to make a list of all my characters and sort and explain them and I'm usually against any kind of classification.
Tom Selleck is a good actor and very charismatic. I can see why they offered the part to him, but he's no Harrison Ford. He's more like Tom Cruise IMO. All of his characters are very similar, and he plays that type of role well, but I'm not sure if he has the acting range that Harrison Ford has.
DeleteOkay, I've been thinking about this all week, trying to figure out something i can add.
ReplyDelete*Ten minutes pass.
Okay.
The number one thing I came up with is focus. Actors on stage live in the world of the story. They have to put everything else away, no waiting for phone calls, no thinking about dinner, about problems, about trips to the grocery store. When you are on stage, nothing else matters except for telling the story, and fulfilling your part of the story.
When you write, you don't have ten thousand people watching you, (thank goodness, since so much of the time I write in my pajamas), but that doesn't mean that your words won't be read ten thousand times. I think for me, I don't often treat my writing time as seriously as if opening Word meant stepping into the spotlight. For me, that's the lesson. When it is writing time, you need to shut out the world, live in the story you created for the amount of time you can carve out, and treat it as sacred. No checking pintrest, or facebook, or hatrack while writing, because honestly, that's just bad acting.
Excellent advice Sheena, and one that I'm ashamed to admit I really needed.
DeleteI like what you've said about giving characters someplace to go. I've read some books where the emotional journey comes to a dead end, and then it just drags. Have a starting point and a destination...that's good stuff!
ReplyDeleteI like how you described it better than I did, but that is exactly what I was thinking, "emotional journey come to a dead end." There is no place to go after that.
DeleteThanks for commenting.