Showing posts with label women. Show all posts
Showing posts with label women. Show all posts

Monday, February 23, 2015

Writing women

This is something of a pet peeve of mine; female characters in genre. It seems to be a great mystery for quite a few people just where these "strong female characters come from. At least Joss Whedon gets asked that question over and over. I've heard the same complaint from many other creators as well.

Lately there's been a lot of talk lately surrounding the trope of strong female character, mostly along the lines of how faulty the premise is. I think it may have started with The Trinity Syndrome. Actually, no. It goes a lot further back than that. There are Damsels in Distress and Women in Refrigerators hidden all through our modern mythology. That is when the fiction deigns to admit that women exist at all. Yes, I'm looking at you Tolkien.


Well, for one, dear author reading this; you should. There is a huge, untapped marketshare in women of the world and every one of us should be taking note. The romance genre for example, whose readers are almost solely women, raked in just over $1 billion in 2013. It may be that women just naturally like romance more, but somehow I doubt it. I don't think that's the whole truth anyway.

I have a theory about this; I think part of why we read fiction is to find ourselves in other people. Sure, there is an element of escape there, and stress relief and excitement (David Farland also has theories about this which he discusses at length in Million Dollar Outlines). But I also think that we are always looking for human connection and that doesn't change when we turn to fiction. And I think that a lot of especially speculative fiction is either knowingly or unknowingly trying to turn women away from it.


Here's what you do: write humans. Have your women want something. And that something can not be your male protagonist. If you have a love interest for example, be sure you know what they want. Have them pursue it even if it may come at the cost of the relationship. Let them be heroic. I know that the instinct is to come up with ways to put the loved one in danger but you should try to at least curb that urge. Let your female characters fight for good alongside your hero if that's what they want. And for goodness' sake, let them talk to each other.


Endeavor to make about half your characters female because, after all, about half of the world's population is female. And if you don't, at least have a reason for it and realize that your lack of women will have consequences to your characters. You will have swaths of men who will never be able to have a family. Historically, that kind of situation has lead to unrest and wars. And while it might be interesting to write an epic fantasy exploring the social ramifications of the scarcity of women so common to the genre (oo that does sound interesting, memo to me, write this story), that might not be what you're looking for.

That witness your character is interviewing, is there any reason they need to be male? Or the traffic cop who pulls your MC over? Women have been a part of all wars and revolutions throughout history. As spies, warriors, leaders and all sorts of other roles often considered to be less important. Pirates, smiths, kings, gods, there are very few roles that women historically have not occupied. I hear that argument a lot so allow me to reiterate: by removing women from your narrative of epic fantasy, you are not making your world more real, but less so.


For that matter, let's talk about monsters. This is something I think the Alien series got really right: the eponymous alien is female. If there is only one of whatever species of monster you've come up with, that one had better be female or intersex. Because while, to quote Granny Weatherwax one of anything is no good, the basis of the species seems to most likely be in the female of the species. There are, for example species of lizards that are only ever female. See for example whiptail lizards. I at least have never heard of a species of males reproducing through parthenogenesis in reality, yet we do it all the time in fiction.

I know there is a great urge to follow the narrative we've been reading all our lives. Believe me, I keep falling for the same narrative over and over. But here's the thing; we can all write much more realistic and interesting narratives if we push past the lazy options and search for the hidden gem inside.

Wednesday, February 5, 2014

Awesome Female Villains

I'm pretty excited for the movie Maleficent coming out this Summer.  Maleficent is such a powerful villain but is so two-dimensional in Sleeping Beauty.  I’d love to see her fully fleshed out, and Angelina Jolie is such an amazing actress.  Can’t wait to see what she does with the character. 

The movie has got me thinking of other villainous female characters that I have loved over time.  So here is my list in reverse alphabetical order.

WARNING:  Massive spoilers.  Don't read a section if you haven't seen the movie or TV show.

1.  Mother Gothal  from Tangled. 
Disney has a lot of villainesses, but most of them like Maleficent are just evil and fairly under-developed (although Ursula is another awesome).  Mother Gothal is a little more complex than the others.  She is about as evil as you can get, kidnapping baby Rapunzel, using Rapunzel for years, manipulating everyone, and callously stabbing Flynn.   There is no doubt she is the bad guy, but her relationship with Rapunzel at times borders on sweet. 
She is very narcissistic and does subtlety put down Rapunzel, but there are also moments of tenderness and the way they part by telling each other they love each other more is rather touching.  I like that their relationship complex instead of it being overtly abusive (like in Cinderella).  It adds dimension to both Mother Gothal and Rapunzel, and it makes Mother Gothal a very compelling villain.

2.  Dolores Umbridge from Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix.   

Dolores is not a villain that you love to hate.  She is one that you just hate with a seething passion, but the reason that she inspires such venom from the fans is exactly why she’s so awesome.  Dolores is very unassuming, a short, middle-aged woman who dresses mostly in pink and decorates her office with kittens.  She seems more prone to be to be ridiculed rather than of a force of pure evil, but the fact that it is unexpected makes her evilness all the more. 
She’s a lot like Nurse Ratchet (OFOTCN) in that she seemingly means well (Dolores truly believes that she’s doing good) but ultimately savors having power over others.  She took a tyrannical hold of Hogwarts with all her educational decrees that allowed her to read the students’ mail, punish them with torture (blood quills), and banning them from extracurricular activities or even gathering in small groups.  She is most terrifying because her actions mirror many horrible movements in history, and her rise to power demonstrates how easily freedoms can slowly be taken away from us.  I agree with Stephen King when he called Umbridge the "greatest make-believe villain to come along since Hannibal Lecter."  She’s a truly horrifying character. 

3.  Darla from Buffy the Vampire Slayer and Angel.

Darla is the first vampire shown on Buffy the Vampire Slayer, and she does a fantastic job of playing an innocent, duped school girl until her fangs come out.  Julie Benz just looks angelic, and her voice is so sweet and soft, a perfect contrast to the demon inside.  She dies in the first season of Buffy without much of a chance for development, but when she is later resurrected on Angel, Darla really gets to shine in all her villainous glory. 
Darla and Angel have a long history together.  She sired him, and they spent decades together slaughtering and torturing innocent people until Angel got cursed with his soul.  No one knows Angel like Darla, and she gets to him in a way that no other villain can.  I love how powerful she is, and how much Angel fears her.  I love the bad girl duo of Darla and Drucilla (another great villainess) and how they go shopping together.  I love how Darla pushes Angel into darkness.  He doesn’t lose his soul, but he still comes pretty close to becoming evil.    
But it doesn’t end there.  Darla gets a full redemption character arc on Angel, and the way she dies the second time is pretty powerful.  If you haven’t seen Angel, I suggest you pull it up on Netflix.  Darla is in seasons 2 and 3, and they are worth watching just for her.  She’s my favorite kind of villain.

4.  Cersei Lannister from Game of Thrones. 

I haven’t read the books (but I plan to), and I’ve only watched seasons 1 and 2, so keep that in mind and PLEASE do not leave any spoilers in the comments (for those who have not seen this show, please note that this is an HBO series, so expect A LOT of sex, violence, and nudity). 

I wouldn't be surprised if Cersei is despised by most of the fans, but I think she's pretty awesome.  Yes, Cersei is having an incestual affair with her twin brother.  Yes, she wants her brother to kill the kid who saw them.  And yes, she has a lot of people killed to stay in power.  She is ruthless, vain, power-hungry, short-sighted, manipulative, and has a real blind spot for her children, especially the horrible, monster Joffrey.  Even worse, she’s mean to Tyrion.  She’s does terrible things, but she knows the game she is playing has high stakes.  What she does, she does to keep her children safe, and I have to respect her for that.

5.  Azula from Avatar the Last Airbender. 

If you don’t know I’m a huge ATLA fan, you haven’t been reading this blog.  The show is pure brilliance, and Azula is exactly what makes this show work.  Azula is Prince Zuko’s sister.  She is stronger, smarter, and more talented than Zuko in every way, but she is also a complete psychopath.  She torments and manipulates him throughout his childhood and beyond, and is the perfect villain to step in when Zuko starts on his redemption character arc. 
Azula is a formidable antagonist.  She is relentless in pursuing Aang and his friends, she infiltrates the government of the largest city in the Earth Kingdom and manages to take it over with Machiavellian skill.  She even kills or nearly kills Aang. 

One of my favorite episodes is The Beach where Zuko and Azula (and Azula’s two sidekicks) are sent away to Ember Island where Azula decides to keep her royalty a secret and try to fit in with normal people.  Ultimately she fails.  I love seeing this whole other side to her which hints that she may have a vulnerable side, wanting to be accepted.  

Later when her sidekicks Mai and Tylee betray her, she loses it completely.  Azula relies on her power (political and bending) and fear to control everyone, and when that fails her, she doesn’t know what else to do.  She starts to doubt herself which ultimately leads to Zuko and Katara defeating her.  Azula is a fascinating character, and she has some real awesome lines too.  Truly one of the best villains ever.

So there are my five awesome female villains.   Who are some of your favorite evil female characters?

~MaryAnn